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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Sat May 05, 2012 1:05 pm

In the first chapter Liam seems like he has a major additude problem. Laughing

I have read them both at least 3 times.Just saying. Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Sat May 05, 2012 1:08 pm

Most of them are a little cranky.
The End of the World will do that to you. Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Sat May 05, 2012 1:43 pm

That's true. Very Happy= :D

I like how you have put a bit of comedy with the mayhem.Evenly balanced.
*two thumbs up and a toe*
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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Sat May 05, 2012 2:22 pm

With the characters I'm given I don't have much choice. Laughing

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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Sat May 05, 2012 3:15 pm

Why am I the crazy guy in the bushes? Shrug
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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Sat May 05, 2012 3:23 pm

The only time you're not the crazy guy in the bushes is when Liam's next to you making you look like the sane guy in the bushes.

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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Sat May 05, 2012 3:26 pm

Ya know.....I find that an acceptable answer. Thinking
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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Sat May 05, 2012 3:33 pm

Six wrote:
Why am I the crazy guy in the bushes? Shrug
Well apparently Your the Southern Lumber-Jack that can barely contain your manly tears,crazy guy in the bushes. "Well I'll be a son a brainmuncher"..
Laughing

My god I laughed so hard!
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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Sat May 05, 2012 3:36 pm

Hey, watch your language. That's not very ladylike. Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Sat May 05, 2012 3:48 pm

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Hey, watch your language. That's not very ladylike. Razz
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Well I do declare..I don't know what ever came over me.. Embarassed



*Note- I never say" Ï do declare"..Never!
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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Sat May 05, 2012 4:25 pm

lolz
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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Tue May 08, 2012 5:37 am

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The only time you're not the crazy guy in the bushes is when Liam's next to you making you look like the sane guy in the bushes.

Story of my life.

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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Tue May 08, 2012 7:10 pm

I'd like to point out that I'm only crazy because no one mentioned to me that "Chimera" was not a playable race. I hope I at least get slightly better. Start enjoying the game and making jokes at the "cliched dialogue," so to speak.

Also, could you, at some point in the future throw in a flashback chapter about what the nationers were doing when they first came across the zombie menace? This is just a thought, BTW. I don't want to tell you how to write the story or anything.
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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Tue May 08, 2012 8:03 pm

I can't make any promises. I can only tell the story that presents itself to me as I'm writing it.
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Could be that it is all a game and you're the only sane one.

Race wasn't a guideline or anything in the rules. Wasn't part of the (non)plan. I'm apparently just trying to be pseudorealistic as possible concerning the setting. You'll note that Dingo doesn't talk despite being clearly intelligent. And if it makes you feel any better, I don't think Ratchet would have appeared as a Lombax either.

As for a flashback, I don't know what started the zombie menace(s). Maybe something will come up if that gets explained.
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To those waiting on their abilities, sorry for the delay. I'll try to get those lined out tomorrow.

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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Wed May 09, 2012 5:13 am

Don't reveal how it came about unless a character actually knows it. Going by perspective when writing survival horror types are more interesting. Keep going the way you are going.

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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Wed May 09, 2012 9:16 am

Do I still have glowing yellow eyes? I didn't see that part mentioned in the chapter.
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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Wed May 09, 2012 10:46 am

You need to be as normal as possible to make your weirdness stand out. That's why I left out the glow and focused more on the cough. You're perfectly normal, but just "off" in a couple ways.


@Liam. I'm not a fan of sudden changes to the type of storytelling perspective, so I doubt I would move to anything drastically different.

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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Wed May 09, 2012 10:53 am

...You used a different word than you did before! *GASPSHOCKHORROR* You changed man!

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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Wed May 09, 2012 11:59 am

That's not true! You take it back!
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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Wed May 09, 2012 2:11 pm

I've been known to say "If something works be careful if you mess with it" Trust 'Monkey and it will turn out ok. *takes off old fart hat*
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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Wed May 09, 2012 3:55 pm

Yeah, I would keep the whole knowing what caused the zombie outbreak at bay. other wise keep doing what you are doing, these stories are great.


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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Wed May 09, 2012 5:12 pm

I mean, how could you not trust someone who can boogie down so well?
Monkey 2 :monkey2:

Abilities are done. Still not sure when the actual next chapter is gonna hit, but rest assured it is coming.

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Active Skills: Quick wit and able to keep my sh*t together in stressful situations.

Knowledge Skills: Know enough to be a professor at the School of Hard Knocks. Watched a lot of MacGyver (not MacGruber) growing up, that's got to be worth something.

Limitations: Might jump the gun rather than waiting for plan to come together due to my ADD.

Supplies: The environment will provide all I need.

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Able to quickly understand the basics of how to do any combat maneuver he sees performed. This makes him quite the fountain of knowledge. Unfortunately he has none of the extreme athletic ability needed to perform most of them. On the upside, his great speed allows him to go toe to toe with many other fighters. Though his blows are less effective, he can still hit with a lot more of them.
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Knowledge Skills: computers, negotiation, organization, can repair a lot of things (and quickly learn whatever I need to), ability to assess situations and see things others can't, sensitivity to people's aura's and moods. Some knowledge of chemistry and biology, various bits of knowledge on lots of other things too.

Limitations: Fear of heights .. fear of snakes... (I am a bunny after all!!)

Supplies: .40 caliber handgun, 12 gauge shotgun, .22 rifle... fully stocked first aid supplies, several daggers, and a katana.

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Active Skills: Skilled contractor I can build a house. First Aid certified for over 20 years. Climbed many 14k mountains, skilled map reader and camper, great rifle marksman, pistol marksmanship only ok.

Knowledge Skills: Electronics, restored old amplifiers as a hobby, I've built and restored timepieces.Leadership and planning skills from having my own construction business for years I kept my employees busy and happy. I can cook anything anywhere from a campsite stove to a gourmet kitchen, my gardens keep my family and friends loaded with yummy veggies. I've been around a long time I've picked up a lot of stuff over the years that younger people don't know. I know my physical limitations and I've learned to work around them.

Limitations: I'm half the man I used to be physically, I'm losing muscle mass and my sixpack hangs over my belt. I don't have the stamina I used to. I'm still pretty strong but I don't last as long. If I was in a fight I'd need to win quick or I'm toast.My eyesight has degenerated since I turned 40. I need to wear glasses for reading.

Supplies: I have a lot of tools, I could build a house if I had the materials. I've also got a generator, lots of gold timepieces. I have access to a hidden room nearby my house that contains enough weapons, ammo, gunpowder and gunsmithing tools to supply an armory...literally.

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Old enough to have been around the block, and young enough to go around a few more times too. Though he's gained some weight, he's still spry enough to pull his own and more. The experience at his disposal is invaluable, and he knows at least something about a wide variety of topics. His experience may not have included zombie slaying before the ZA hit, but he's bringing his every skill to bear against them. Whether it's building traps, laying low, camping out, or mowing down, Rrwatch has done it before and does so again now with a practiced hand.

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Knowledge Skill: good under pressure good sence of direction able to calm people down

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I took an arrow to the knee witch I had an OP for but now I can only run short distances before it plays up.

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I think there another question but my iPhone seems to have cut it off I can add later if needed.
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Born and raised in the deadliest place on Earth and still kicking. How much tougher can you be? When your daily routine involves fighting 30 ft. crocodiles to check the mail, battling through flood waters to go to the store, and putting down spiders so big they have mana bars just for something to do, a little thing like zombies almost seems trivial.
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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Wed May 09, 2012 8:19 pm

Interesting bunch you have there Cobalt... I'm looking forward to the next chapter of the intrepid band of sixth.
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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Thu May 10, 2012 4:47 am

And if you want any help in how to write someone going crazy I can help you with that no problem.

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PostSubject: Re: Zombie Attack Imminent! Defend the Nation!   Thu May 10, 2012 10:38 am

No need. I trained with the best.
"Cheese for everyone! Wait. Scratch that. Cheese for no one. No cheese can be just as much of a celebration if you don't like cheese."

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